Friday, September 29, 2017

Under Thy Shadow - 03 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under whose shades
My jovial youth,
My dreamy evenings
Turned into autumnal landscapes?
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Anuranjita Ghadei 01 May 2018

Wow, what a beautiful write. Loved going through the lovely poem. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++++

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Anuranjita Ghadei 01 May 2018

Wow, what a beautiful write. Loved going through the lovely poem. Thanks for the sharing.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 01 December 2017

Why did my heart Made a start To shimmer beyond Into snowy coolness With a single touch Of your palms on mine? Thanks for shared a lovely poem10+++++

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Hans Vr 29 September 2017

Evanescent droplets of silver rain Wow, so extremely beautiful! I love the poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 29 September 2017

It was you, my darling- Who molded My innocent eyes Into clouds euphoric And my childish dreams Into evanescent droplets of silver rain, In the ages following the day I met you on the bay. One of the best poems shared. 10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 September 2017

very nice do read my message

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Lopamudra Kajolika 29 September 2017

It was you, my darling- Who molded My innocent eyes Into clouds euphoric And my childish dreams Into evanescent droplets of silver rain, Beautiful poem, thanks poet. 10+++++

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Sabita Sahoo 29 September 2017

Why did my heart Made a start To shimmer beyond Into snowy coolness With a single touch Of your palms on mine? Highly romantic write. Thanks. 10+++

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Pratik Rajani 29 September 2017

dreamy one you may like my poem be like water and poetry check out

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Gajanan Mishra 29 September 2017

my innocent eyes, good write

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