Under Thy Shadow - 03 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Under Thy Shadow - 03

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Under whose shades
My jovial youth,
My dreamy evenings
Turned into autumnal landscapes?

The Tom in me stopped
Running after the butterflies and
Entered the land of Eros
With Jerry's hand in hand?

The golden figure
Of maiden youth
Was now surrounded with moons
Enchanting and adorable,
Erotic and obsolete,
Charming yet fragile,
Hiding the next moment
Behind the clouds
For causes unknown.


Why did my heart
Made a start
To shimmer beyond
Into snowy coolness
With a single touch
Of your palms on mine?

It was you, my darling-
Who molded
My innocent eyes
Into clouds euphoric
And my childish dreams
Into evanescent droplets of silver rain,
In the ages following the day
I met you on the bay.

Under Thy Shadow - 03
Friday, September 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,dream girl,eternity,eyes,longing,love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pratik Rajani 29 September 2017

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Sabita Sahoo 29 September 2017

Why did my heart Made a start To shimmer beyond Into snowy coolness With a single touch Of your palms on mine? Highly romantic write. Thanks. 10+++

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Gajanan Mishra 29 September 2017

my innocent eyes, good write

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Lopamudra Kajolika 29 September 2017

It was you, my darling- Who molded My innocent eyes Into clouds euphoric And my childish dreams Into evanescent droplets of silver rain, Beautiful poem, thanks poet. 10+++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 September 2017

very nice do read my message

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Anuranjita Ghadei 01 May 2018

Wow, what a beautiful write. Loved going through the lovely poem. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++++

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Anuranjita Ghadei 01 May 2018

Wow, what a beautiful write. Loved going through the lovely poem. Thanks for the sharing.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 01 December 2017

Why did my heart Made a start To shimmer beyond Into snowy coolness With a single touch Of your palms on mine? Thanks for shared a lovely poem10+++++

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Hans Vr 29 September 2017

Evanescent droplets of silver rain Wow, so extremely beautiful! I love the poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 29 September 2017

It was you, my darling- Who molded My innocent eyes Into clouds euphoric And my childish dreams Into evanescent droplets of silver rain, In the ages following the day I met you on the bay. One of the best poems shared. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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