Under Thy Shadow - 02 Comments

My life is but a bud of fire, An aspiring glow Under thy shadow. Thank you poet for shared a wonderful poem.10+++++

From a shy young boy To a daring spirited man, From a timid, confused toy To a Do-Anything-, I-Can Nicely penned ode to father. Thanks poet. 10+++

You made a hero out of zero, A real hero out of me. A real ode to a great father. Thanks poet for the sharing. 10++++

A beautiful poem of tribute to a father to whom one owes much of what one becomes. Rated 10

You made a hero out of zero, A real hero out of me. Yes father builds us from within. Nice poem. 10+++

My life is but a bud of fire, An aspiring glow Under thy shadow. Beautiful ode for your father. Thanks for its sharing. 10++