Under Thy Shadow - 02 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Under Thy Shadow - 02

Rating: 5.0


Under whose shades

The anger of my youth,

The colour of my dreams,

The ambitions of my life-

Took a twist, a historic turn?


From a shy young boy

To a daring spirited man,

From a timid, confused toy

To a Do-Anything-, I-Can

From a helpless, aimless lad

To a spirited divine being,

From a restless reckless mind

To a nesting, blissful king,


You made a hero out of zero,

A real hero out of me.


Oh Papa, my dear father

To my land of disillusioned air

And polluted tongues

And deafened ears

You brought me

A planet of safety,

A sky of dreams,

An ocean of tranquility,

A galaxy of friendly souls

Who sing songs of liberty.


My life is but a bud of fire,

An aspiring glow

Under thy shadow.

Thursday, September 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: parenting,father,father and son,love,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Aparajita Das 14 September 2017

My life is but a bud of fire, An aspiring glow Under thy shadow. Beautiful ode for your father. Thanks for its sharing. 10++

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 01 December 2017

My life is but a bud of fire, An aspiring glow Under thy shadow. Thank you poet for shared a wonderful poem.10+++++

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Lopamudra Kajolika 29 September 2017

From a shy young boy To a daring spirited man, From a timid, confused toy To a Do-Anything-, I-Can Nicely penned ode to father. Thanks poet. 10+++

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Sabita Sahoo 29 September 2017

You made a hero out of zero, A real hero out of me. A real ode to a great father. Thanks poet for the sharing. 10++++

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Nudershada Cabanes 15 September 2017

A beautiful poem of tribute to a father to whom one owes much of what one becomes. Rated 10

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Sanjukta Sahoo 15 September 2017

You made a hero out of zero, A real hero out of me. Yes father builds us from within. Nice poem. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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