Thursday, September 14, 2017

Under Thy Shadow - 01 Comments

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Under whose shade

My playful childhood
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Lopamudra Kajolika 29 September 2017

The Alice in me Entered the tender wonderland And slept a blissful and dreamy Summer afternoon? Wow, what a lovely write? 10++++

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Sabita Sahoo 29 September 2017

And you made me resonate To the tunes of my clan, To the music of my people, To the beats of my land, And become a real hero A real young man. Beautiful ode to mother. Thanks poet. 10++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 15 September 2017

The Alice in me Entered the tender wonderland And slept a blissful and dreamy Summer afternoon... A nice imaginative poem on childhood spent under he shade of mother's love and care. Nicely written poem. 10++++++

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Anita Aparajita Das 14 September 2017

And you made me resonate To the tunes of my clan, To the music of my people, To the beats of my land, And become a real hero A real young man. A beautiful stanza showing parental effort behind every successful man. Thanks poet.10+

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