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Under this shed of tree in this winter,
Grey soil dreams more in beauty veil,
Big mountains dream under this shed,
Shed of this tree is dreamy in weather.
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Magnificent, Kumarmani. For me, this poem is all about perspective. The tree no longer occupies a place, a patch of earth....It serves to frame and hold and define all the elements around it. That tree is a centre of its universe. A great poem; a 10.
It’s a beautiful poem! The picturesque beauty of winter is very neatly expressed. Finally, the last two lines, “Every building looks like princess in love/every soul meditates for light of dignity” delve our mind into sheer tranquility and glee! Thanks dear sir for sharing! !
The poem brings out the beauty of a scenery touched by wintry winds. Thanks for this exquisitely crafted poem with some lovely expressions, such as: 'Every building looks like princess in love'
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7/19/2025 11:40:21 AM # 1.0.0
Beauty of a winter morning so nicely painted in colorful lines, a lovely poem.