Friday, December 19, 2014

Under Their Feet Comments

Rating: 2.5

She walked away
past me
along the pavement.
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Elias Uddin
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Khairul Ahsan 26 April 2020

The poem starts well but hasn't been able to describe adequately the feelings as you described in your comment.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 December 2014

Ok i just read yor poemmail bro. A winsome appealing and super poem here. This is about a girl that reminded u of yor sister? Hows it a reply to nudity? I dont undrstand deep poems sometimes. Do explain pleez. God bless.

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