Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Under Their Conniving Noses Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have been the me,
I have been blessed to have been.
I didn't have to go anywhere to pretend.
And where I've been I did my 'thing'.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 June 2011

I liked it. Great poem written with nice texture. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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