Tuesday, January 3, 2006

Under The Wrath Of War Comments

Rating: 5.0

And so the juggernauts roared
As the firebirds soared
And the soldiers howled
While corrupt politicians pleased the crowd
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Michelle Cortiza 09 January 2006

Wow. This poem is so marvelous and touching. The things said are so true and so real. And to think we are actually going through this. This is a great poem Carlos. Keep it up! Michie

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David Tanguay 04 January 2006

War and Peace! Perhaps the later can only be found in heaven (feel for your poem)

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A. B. 03 January 2006

Carlos....this is a good poem. We are trying to escape from war.....but it always seems to stand in our way. May there be peace on earth. Peace

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