Thursday, June 25, 2009

Under The Weather Comments

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A spell of heat rising sharply,
At whatever time I try to flee.
So, I opted not to resist,
To keep still is quite an ease!
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Allenace Muchi
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For it's easy when I die away, No whine, no pain, no cry! Just asleep.....sssshhhhhh.... oh so much pain in ur poem and anguish too... i appriciate writing in it... honest one i must say....10 read mine..'Miss I miss you' Mary to marry' you go alone' &O mother

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Sameer Ahmed 28 June 2009

A nice predictive poem with foreordainement of the peaceful futuristic theme. The calmness seems to have overwhelmed in the essence of the poem.....

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