Friday, July 11, 2008

Under The Weather Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first dark day of summer came sooner than I had hoped,
I took one look at it and just looked back at me
'You're a total wreck' it said
'Wearing a jacket in this overheated hell hole'
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Kyle Jones
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Shelbi Holzen 30 November 2009

wow its very good i love it! =D

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Makayla Straight 07 July 2009

Good Job Kyle, I love this poem! Keep up the good work.

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Tyease Collins 15 January 2009

...I wonder why I never commented this one. I always make it a habit to comment all your poems... You are too amazing at writing poetry Grr i wish i was better.....=] -Tyease

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Kyle Jones

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Tegucigalpa: Honduras: Carribean
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