Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Under The Surface Comments

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It seems so calm,
So calm and pleasant
On the surface.
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Anna Turtle
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Suchoon Mo 08 August 2006

This is somewhat like Japanese Renga, linkage of triplets with luscid phrases. Also the difficult task of subject-object synthesis is attempted and is done. I enjoyed reading the poem.

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