Under The Sun & Moon On English Bay Comments

I enjoy the idea of wild freedom and its expression first in the living, second in the poem. peace and love.

This reads line a schematic blueprint of the soul on a journey of thought, reflection and discovery with mind photographs and memories detailed in this pure and intense write. Marvelous!

the intoxicating tactile crush ooze felt of youth wild sense. expertly crafted sea wall walk of toes in sand and sea water. rec beach in moon full. see leah we can't walk away from this poem uninspired. an 11.

Loved this captivaring poem! Beautifully descriptive and a joy to read! Hey! Happy 23rd Birthday! ! ! ! !