Saturday, March 10, 2018

Under The Sun Comments

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What is my sin never done before? what is my sin that won't be done some more
is it adultery, theft or murder
Hasn't it been done in Sodom and Gomorrah
It would still be done even by my son
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Adams Elizabeth Oyarese
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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2018

I love the rhyme and refrain of the poem. Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. A lovely creation penned in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Oyarese.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 March 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Adams E. O. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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thank you... I will try to

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