Saturday, July 25, 2009

Under The Steady Rain Comments

Rating: 4.0

Walking under the steady rain
Struggling on this road full of pain
Seaching for a sunny land
Finding that place is what I've planned
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Jof Lomb
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Danny H 25 July 2009

This was very very very Good. I love the rain one of my favorite quotes are 'I love to walk in the rain because noone can tell your crying' not word for word but you know what i mean which you described in your poem VERY Good!

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