Tuesday, July 21, 2020

Under The Shade Of That Mango Tree! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now it makes me realise what shade I am missing these days
The heat of the sun and the cool breeze at the same time

Lay down on a wooden cot stretching legs
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 July 2020

Under the shed of the mango tree there are lots of memories hidden. You have brilliantly revealed these in this excellent poem. Butterfly flutters and bull pulls the cart under shed of mango tree and mango leaves fall on ground. Everything in childhood you have perceived. A crystal clear picture is drawn in this excellent poem....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2020

To see those falling leaves flying in the air/And collecting them to count how many in an hour...wonderful. An excellent poem....10

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Michael Jack 21 July 2020

Wonderful poem, we all miss old golden days aren't we?

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Kostas Lagos 21 July 2020

Summer brings pleasant memories...lovely poem

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Rajnish Manga 21 July 2020

Great action scene of village life created in flashback style. We all miss those leisurely days in a carefree mode, Thanks, Asim ji.

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