Now it makes me realise what shade I am missing these days
The heat of the sun and the cool breeze at the same time
Lay down on a wooden cot stretching legs
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To see those falling leaves flying in the air/And collecting them to count how many in an hour...wonderful. An excellent poem....10
Great action scene of village life created in flashback style. We all miss those leisurely days in a carefree mode, Thanks, Asim ji.
Under the shed of the mango tree there are lots of memories hidden. You have brilliantly revealed these in this excellent poem. Butterfly flutters and bull pulls the cart under shed of mango tree and mango leaves fall on ground. Everything in childhood you have perceived. A crystal clear picture is drawn in this excellent poem....10