Thursday, August 9, 2012

Under The Night Sky Comments

Rating: 4.0

Under the night sky
Wild and free
Two stars collide
In ecstasy
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Lisa Michelle
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Valerie Dohren 12 August 2012

Beautifully written poem - well done

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Kelly Seale 12 August 2012

Lisa, This is amazing! It flows like honey from a jar, Two souls join as one, Under the Night Sky. And that last stanza, Wow! This piece leaves an impression upon the reader, something us writers strive to achieve when we create. Job well done! Graet Ink Lisa! Graet Ink! ; -) -Kelly.

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Sina Farajzadeh 09 August 2012

Wow. Amazing. I really like it. It's a great poem of you.

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