Thursday, June 9, 2022

Under The Lilac Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

The breeze shook the leaves ,flapping each other
A string of fragrance, seeping into the chest
Close my eyes. Spit out the body's wordy language
The fragrance of the lungs, swimming through the body
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Yan Feng
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" The experience of life has another taste Hanging at the corners of her mouth, uptrend" marvellous. To Myfavourites with Top Score

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Part 3. It gives me pleasure that you also stand for the same cause. Five stars.

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Part 2. " Look into the silence of the night Life that works in secret grows strong under the moonlight" My heart grows heavy under the weight of the young souls who sacrificed their lives for the noble cause of freedom of expression

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Good poem. Great images, though a little melancholic. " Blindfolded darkness, /hiding from the glare /Stolen spring, life upward" Reminds me of the faces of the poor four thousand odd eighteen year olds massacred at Tiananmen Square.

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