Friday, March 16, 2012

Under The Laburnum Tree Comments

Rating: 4.2

(A simple tale)

Under the Laburnum tree
She saw his gentle face
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Valerie Dohren
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Anjana 25 February 2019

Poem is beautiful

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Robert Beck 28 October 2012

A tree as beautiful as your lovely poem.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 April 2012

A touching write.

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Richard D. Remler 13 April 2012

Oh the tales these trees could tell if we knew how to listen. A beautiful but sad poem. penned with skill.

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Saiom Shriver 05 April 2012

released from the bars of the rib cage ... a beautiful and powerful poem

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Danny Draper 18 March 2012

Unrequited love, sad but released to hopefully the sanctuary of a more loving garden. A lovely poem. Which species of Laburnum, L chinese?

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Karen Deeks 18 March 2012

A beautiful passage through, time love and life experiences in a place chosen for it's relevance for she... Lovely piece Val.... Thanks Karen

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Robert Green 17 March 2012

as always Val, a great write, a great poem :)

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