Friday, September 4, 2020

Under The Green Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the green sea,
A thousand creatures roam freely.
Carp and herring move
Their scaly, silver bodies
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Shaun Cronick 13 September 2020

Great poems need to be revisited and reread from time to time. Especially those with the word green in their title. For it's a calming colour just like this poem which is brinely rewarded with a full score. Thanks again Dominic and keep writing.

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Dominic Windram 09 September 2020

Thanks Shaun...it was indeed a pleasure to compose...my youngest niece likes it a lot!

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Shaun Cronick 05 September 2020

Dominic fish is my favourite food and when combined with a great poem it is appetite never sated.A full score for your more than marvellous poem good sir that brings the sea world home to any fortunate reader. Many thanks for sharing and take care.

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