Under The Exotic Tree Comments

An uplifting rhyming poem in form ab ab cc. Thrilling expression with nice penmanship. Thank u dear madam for sharing this gem.10

This is the same theme as my FIRST KISS FOR K. W. But your poem is laced in poetic diction and rhythms and a rhyme scheme which I would have missed if your reader in Brazil had not highlighted it. The things you said about my poem are abundantly present here: the sweetness and charm, the clarity and simplicity. I'm going to put a copy of your poem with mine in my poetry folder. One poem with a vision of first love can be dismissed as sentimentality, BUT T-W-O P-O-E-M-S are unassailable.

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Misha Allport To: Mihaela Pirjol Date-Time: 1/25/2014 10: 05: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Under the Exotic Tree - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The ababcc rhyme scheme is handled beautifully in a type of sonnet form-lovely. I hope you will continue sharing your gentle expressions. Good luck. Mishka Allport-Fortaleza, Brasil

beautiful imagery, well penned