Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Under The Dome Comments

Rating: 4.5

At times they will fly under. The dome
contains jungles. Invent a sky under the dome.

Creatures awake, asleep, at play, aglow:
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Elise Paschen
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M Asim Nehal 12 September 2020

Yes under the dome is fantastic poem.

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Darren Jkoeryo 07 August 2020

Everything is happening under the dome and believe the dome is world itself.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 September 2016

A fantastic flight of imagery is displayed in this beautifully conceived meaningful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Seamus O Brian 19 September 2016

Interesting visual depiction. The light-hearted, flowing language moved me through the poem, and the imagery kept my attention.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 September 2016

A living museum. Exist to be observed: never migrate, but live, then die, under the dome. Lips, lashes, eyes. From outside in, do beings magnify under the dome? Beautiful imaginations incarnated. Thanks poet for the sharing.10 for it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2016

The muse of your imagination! Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2016

To be observed! ! Nice work with the muse of your imagination.

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Elise Paschen

Elise Paschen

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