Thursday, August 7, 2008

Under The Deep Ocean Comments

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A little tadpole swam into your river and,
It became an Island;
The Island expanded and it became a human being;
And the human being grew up to become a Nation!
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Merlin M 07 August 2008

Profound... I especially liked the lines..... 'And the human being grrew up to become a Nation: The Nation went to war and it was conquered, Today its people are buried under the deep ocean like Atlantis.' Gives an image that is so soulful....Like our souls have mounted on horses and leaving for a war... I am intrigued by your genius... It amuses me. Thank you for your work...proceed diligent friend.

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Edward Kofi Louis

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