Thursday, August 2, 2018

Under The Clouds (Rodine Poem) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Under the clouds the river's bow
bathed in mist ferns clinging tight
Under the trees as cool as night
Over the rocks swift waters flow
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Chris Embrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 August 2018

A vivid portrayal of the wonders and beauty of nature. Superb imagery, Chris. Beautifully crafted write.10++++

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Captain Cur 10 August 2018

Great descriptive write, felt like I was there enjoying the beauty and serenity of the slow moving picture your poem painted.

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Ruta Mohapatra 02 August 2018

Beautiful like the violets it describes!

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