Under The Clouds (Rodine Poem) Poem by Chris Embrick

Under The Clouds (Rodine Poem)

Rating: 4.5


Under the clouds the river's bow
bathed in mist ferns clinging tight
Under the trees as cool as night
Over the rocks swift waters flow
along the path sweet violets grow
among the roar a place of quiet
Under the clouds

In high shadows a hint of snow
green mascots rise obscure the light
the mountains rise to lofty heights
from here the valley's far below
Under the clouds.

Thursday, August 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,flowers,hiking,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 August 2018

A vivid portrayal of the wonders and beauty of nature. Superb imagery, Chris. Beautifully crafted write.10++++

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Captain Cur 10 August 2018

Great descriptive write, felt like I was there enjoying the beauty and serenity of the slow moving picture your poem painted.

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Ruta Mohapatra 02 August 2018

Beautiful like the violets it describes!

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Chris Embrick

Chris Embrick

Commerce, Georgia
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