As I saw a muscled man walking by
I remember those summerdays as a passerby
when days were still warm and got hotter
Come here lie with me under the Cherry-tree, my doctor
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4) This reaction is derived from my poem " Under The Cherry Tree" dated on theb 5th Dec.2011 and your most valuable comment seven years after data, that is then 5th Dec 2018 all your precious and valuable and loveliest words most appreciated by me, Sylvia © Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved A.D. Wednesday 26 May 2020
3) you wrote on the 5th December 2018, exactly seven years after, a poem without readers....? you were the only one, the most precious one! This reaction is derived from my poem " Under The Cherry Tree" from 5th Dec.2011 and your most valuable comment seven years after data most appreciated by me, Sylvia
2) your amazing responses were, no blurr, never they were! They were here all crystal clear, beautiful and precious, loveliest, worthiest and senseous,
No Correspondence, Nor A Message, But.... After having discovered, that there was only ONE responder for my poem as Titled: " UNDER THE CHERRY TREE" today, seven years after date, to be exactly i don't exaggerate: 5 December 2011
I have given my response to the lovelyy and excellent comments Mrs. Juan-Austin had done, BUT till now, there is no response from me visible here. I am eager to know how long will this last? For taking away the errors, I thank Poem Hunter so much,
As a passerby you have remembered the day with brilliance of mind. The muscle man was walking there under the cherry tree. The coldest wind of the North had come to sweep. The coolness was felt well and the beauty of cherry tree was amazingly perceived. Those summer days thoughts under the cherry tree still you have remembered. You were happy at that time as you are now. This poem is interestingly penned...10
A very lovely poem. A vivid depiction of the passion felt for a wonderful man. Beautifully and lovingly penned.
Thank you so much, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, exactly 7 (seven) years after I submitted this poem, you are the first and only person who has given a response. Seven years, wow, where have the years gone to? Honestly said, you are a wonderful responder, with these precious comments loveliest words. I am touched very much.Thank you for reading the poem, it's about my own spouse, he's so dear to me. God's Blessings in abundance for you and your beloved spouse.
Thank you so much, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin! I am very happy to see YOU here, exactly on the same date, but 7 years later, but at least you are here! Most delightful atmosphere when you are in my poem's presence.Once again, I have read your precious comments with a caring love.
The beauty of cherry tree ignited the passion you reserve for your husband.
Thank you so much, dear Bharati Poetess for your precious and honest comment. God Bless you in abundance.