Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Under The Bridge Comments

Rating: 5.0

He walks through dark woods in quiet of night,
As bats and barn owls launch into flight
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Ray Lucero
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Bonnie Harding 27 July 2007

This brought back memories of growing up in the city.We've all seen them and I often found myself wondering who they are and how they ended up so alone.A very nice poem, so sad but true...

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Moya Levy 25 March 2006

Ah this is sad Ray, left me with an upsidedown smile. Moyax

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Mary Nagy 24 March 2006

What a sad poem.........yet this is so common today. It breaks my heart to think people actually live like this. What a shame that there aren't enough people helping them. Powerful poem Ray. Sincerely, Mary

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Shannon Chapel 05 December 2005

Ray, I LOVE this poem! Well done. I recently wrote one similar to it called 'The Drifter' inspired by my recent trip to San Francisco. Makes me sad. S

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Donna Nimmo 30 November 2005

A truely wonderful poem. I really liked it alot. It told a story and you are really gifted with words. Sincerely Yours, Donna

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