Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Under The Bottom Comments

Rating: 5.0

Down below
The fire is burning;
Over the top
The wind is howling.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Avid Fan 01 May 2019

Down below The fire is burning; Over the top The wind is howling. A cleverly written poem, sir Bernard.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 30 October 2017

Head and heels cover the collumn. Feet are standing under the bottom I enjoyed the theme of the poem.Thanks for sharing.Regards.10+++++++* Binaya

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2017

Thanks, Binaya.... such comment is truly heartwarming.....

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