Sky watching
On top of a mass of green and brown
Sitting knee to knee
Forehead to forehead
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What a beautiful piece! ! ! I love the superb imagery, this poem is truly captivatingly beautiful, filled with the beauty of true love between a man and a woman! ! ! Thank you so much for blessing us with this poem! ! ! Your poetry always blesses its readers : )
A beautiful poem dedicated to the subject of the patient love between the waiting woman and the providing man!
What a grand love poem! I really loved the vivid imagery and especially the lines' You vanished into thin air But I am here All alone and lonely With bended knees Under the blue star I pray for your safety.'
Such a perfect and wonderful poem about faithful love that prays and awaits it love! Thank you for this grand poem! I never regret visiting your poems, Mrs. Rose Marie
Filled with Such Beauty, Heart and Prayer! .. Again Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
This is so beautifully romantic yet such sorrow, filled with hope! .. Ever so inspiring holding onto love, hopes, and dreams! ..
A beautiful message of longing, so full of wonderful lines. The very title Under the blue star evokes mystical images.
Two hearts beat as one Dreams that are so high They can move mountains. Really beautiful lines.
This is a wonderful piece.....like to read it time and again...
A longing heart's loving lovely words...beautifully crafted...5*****
We live on this blue star where "The night is windy"