Saturday, November 25, 2017

Under The Blue Star Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sky watching
On top of a mass of green and brown
Sitting knee to knee
Forehead to forehead
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 16 September 2025

We live on this blue star where "The night is windy"

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Isadora Quagmire 08 September 2025

What a beautiful piece! ! ! I love the superb imagery, this poem is truly captivatingly beautiful, filled with the beauty of true love between a man and a woman! ! ! Thank you so much for blessing us with this poem! ! ! Your poetry always blesses its readers : )

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Sunny Quagmire 26 August 2025

A beautiful poem dedicated to the subject of the patient love between the waiting woman and the providing man!

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Sunny Quagmire 26 August 2025

What a grand love poem! I really loved the vivid imagery and especially the lines' You vanished into thin air But I am here All alone and lonely With bended knees Under the blue star I pray for your safety.'

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Timber Koleden 15 August 2025

Such a perfect and wonderful poem about faithful love that prays and awaits it love! Thank you for this grand poem! I never regret visiting your poems, Mrs. Rose Marie

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Anjandev Roy 17 July 2023

Marvelous piece.....love to read time and again....

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Craig Moses Uche 24 May 2023

Tbis poem is personal to me, awesome!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 04 April 2023

Touching piece. Good stanzas. Imagery rich

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Anjandev Roy 04 April 2023

This is an outstanding work......thanks for sharing.....

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Anjandev Roy 01 December 2022

This is a marvelous piece.....one of Ur best....

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Rebecca Navarre 20 September 2022

Filled with Such Beauty, Heart and Prayer! .. Again Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 20 September 2022

This is so beautifully romantic yet such sorrow, filled with hope! .. Ever so inspiring holding onto love, hopes, and dreams! ..

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soren Barrett 22 April 2022

A beautiful message of longing, so full of wonderful lines. The very title Under the blue star evokes mystical images.

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C N Premkumar 02 April 2022

Two hearts beat as one Dreams that are so high They can move mountains. Really beautiful lines.

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Anjandev Roy 29 December 2021

This is a wonderful piece.....like to read it time and again...

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Indira Renganathan 28 October 2021

A longing heart's loving lovely words...beautifully crafted...5*****

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Raspberry18 29 September 2021

A sad love story. Very touching.

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Nabakishore Dash 26 August 2021

Brilliant write of love.

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Paula 12 May 2021

I am a sucker for love poems well done.

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Bryan Smoot 12 May 2021

Beautiful love poem 10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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