Hurts hurled from a childhood netherworld
Blames that lay shame about this shepards herd
Guilt glistens sharp with every accusing word
No clean sounds can be sounded, yelled or merely heard
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Surreal and beautiful write. Don't allow anger to conquer you. I added you to my friends' list. :) G.
You have real visceral talent here, great imagery, and strung out on a narrative of power and force. Keep writing, focus, tell your story.