Under Lock And Key Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Under Lock And Key

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When you wrapped you arms around me
I thought is was to give me comfort
I thought is was to keep me safe
I thought it was because you liked the closeness
I thought it was because you wanted to
I thought it was because you loved me
You held me so tight
You were a chain with a lock but no key
Had me exactly where you wanted me to be

Saturday, February 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: realisation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poppi Sykes 09 April 2019

The contents of this poem is always so familiar. It's where trust is betrayed and the feeling of being used is apparent but the realisation isn't acknowledged once the damage has been done. This is simply my understanding of your poem and it is a poem that captures the fear within or after a relationship. Thank you for sharing - Psyked

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Jankovic Zoran 24 February 2019

Every hug is not the same. Sometimes a heavy word can also suffocate us. It looks like she was suddenly written with feelings. Nice

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Amir Marandi 19 February 2019

Ms. Jennifer, an emotional poem, but you are the one having the key, you are the one in control. remember, although it may seem that way, no one has ever taken the control from you. Rainbow of hope will show the path for your happiness.

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Sekharan Pookkat 16 February 2019

A gentle touch will break the lock And release the key from its grove

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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