Saturday, August 20, 2005

Under Kafka's Eyes Comments

Rating: ★3.7

Bound in lace,
First snow,
Nothing to offer
But that destined to
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Lee Ann Schaffer
pink Rejection
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Max Reif 21 August 2005

You have strong images-'red waters' is very ominous. and the emotional closure of your poem is so powerful. A couple things were ambiguous for me on two quick readings-'fearing satisfaction', for example.

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Lee Ann Schaffer

Lee Ann Schaffer

Charleston, South Carolina, US
Lee Ann Schaffer
Lee Ann Schaffer
Charleston, South Carolina, US
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