Under Fire Comments

Your writing is brilliant - the feelings behind it are obviously very intense and real for you. I hope this inspiration doesn't take it's toll. Wonderful work.

Well i have felt pain and HATE before too... and it has eaten me up alive, and it still does; nd i think these thing make you the GREAT poet that you are. good job.. this was another 10 for me. it was very deep and i could relate to it so much.. great job! !

A.45 in ya hand after a 40. All that hate is going to burn you up before you get a chance to become wise. I was filled with this kind of hate when I thought there was not much to live for. Then instead of blaming GOD. I ask GOD for his forgiveness and help. Try it you might be surprised! ! !