Under A Tree Comments

Well articulated, deep sense of intensions and indications, ....deadlock, a tipical computer term also used...thanks for sharing

Nice expression, nice writing.

Wonderful poem, nature and trees are beautiful things.

A profound and compelling perspective. What a unique view. It kept me meditating and re-reading. Thank you.

they dance and sing, mock at my naked feather 真有一股英语风

I saw wonder come down from above cancelled out. Then he came into your life.. and the feather, released all the doubt.. iip

i saw my childhood in this poem. it was fun except there were people around me trying to put me down. mock at my naked feather captivated me the most. as a child, people both adults and other kids would make fun of me for the sake of fun and itself and some some would intentionally degrade and embarrass me. well penned! keep it up!

You are very deep young lady... Another 10.

Such a warm memory...all that is needed to produce a gem is childhood and birds in trees. A wonderful poem.