Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Under A Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting here under a tree
I am yet to make a decree
Whether to move or stay
My mind is on the sway
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Clarence Prince
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Bri Edwards 15 December 2017

Clarence, are you looking down on me? and i don't mean from an airplane! i guess i never read this one. it is a gem. to MyPoemList. i'm still 'doing' the showcases. perhaps i'll use this some day. bri ;)

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Nosheen Irfan 09 March 2016

This is so beautiful. A nice even flow of words..so much melody. A very well-crafted n poetical work. Trees can be great inspiration. Sitting under the shade of a tree has been very rewarding, I must say. I love the content n the tone of the poem.

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Stephani Kievaughan 16 February 2016

down to your minimum's and facing drought yet still grateful for what you've got. very strong and steadfast faith in God's Plan's and mercy. what a NOBLE HEART AND SOUL YOU GOT THERE

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Hans Vr 13 February 2016

The blessing of a tree. Wonderfully expressed in this melodious poem. So many times I live without taking the time to truly enjoy these so very natural pleasures of life. Every day so many blessings come our way, but to be fully aware of them and then pour them in nice verses to share these experiences with the world, that is truly poetic. Excellent work!

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Valsa George 12 February 2016

In the sweltering heat, sitting under a tree in its cool shade is such a relief! Summer heat is escalating every year. The green vegetation is turning brown because of extreme heat! This is exactly the situation in our part of the country! Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem painting the peak summer scene in all its fierceness!

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 10 February 2016

Very nice work. Ryhme is wonderful. Poem flows like a stream. I enjoyed it.

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