Friday, April 19, 2013

Under A Moonlit Sky Comments

Rating: 4.5

Amongst ancient castle walls
Diamonds of dew drops from emerald moss
Her sweet perfume clings to the cold air
Under the moonlit sky
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Melpomene's Tears
COMMENTS
Sara Militello 17 October 2015

Nice. The moon is a favorite subject for poets. Can it be because it give us so much leeway to be romantic under the moonlit vistas it shines upon when full?

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$arah Pillai 17 June 2013

Thanks for the correction Kelvin, I meant ever not every.

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Kelvin Owusu 16 June 2013

lovely piece of poetry, the second stanza may be a minor error i believe you mean ever rather than every. great work though

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Ruth Fumble 24 April 2013

Well, you have described it very well, and I hope he is on he's way.

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Sharon Vincent 20 April 2013

This poem = Love Never Dies. Epic! ! ! ! ........

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