Saturday, August 15, 2020

Under A Blanket Of Water Comments

Rating: 4.3

It has been raining all day
And most of the evening too
The air has grown very cool
In spite of the closed windows
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Ruta Mohapatra
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M Asim Nehal 16 August 2020

A fantastic poem, during rainy season nature remains in silence whereas the raindrops does the pit-pat talking...10+++++ My fav: In such cold deep dark nights Sleep comes easy to the eyes Hope tomorrow will be a bright sunny day And the birds will come out to play

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2020

A beautiful poem on rain. Yeah it is cool inside and don't want to leave the bed. Nicely crafted to make it interesting. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 August 2020

Lovely poem, it relates well with what I have here... five days of almost continual rain and one hopes the sun will be out soon....

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Deluke Muwanigwa 15 August 2020

Nice poem. I would just suggest that you work on your rhyming scheme so that if its AB it remains the same in every stanza to give it more rhythm.

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Ruta Mohapatra 22 August 2020

Thank you, Deluke, for your comments!

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