It has been raining all day
And most of the evening too
The air has grown very cool
In spite of the closed windows
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A beautiful poem on rain. Yeah it is cool inside and don't want to leave the bed. Nicely crafted to make it interesting. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.
Lovely poem, it relates well with what I have here... five days of almost continual rain and one hopes the sun will be out soon....
Nice poem. I would just suggest that you work on your rhyming scheme so that if its AB it remains the same in every stanza to give it more rhythm.
A fantastic poem, during rainy season nature remains in silence whereas the raindrops does the pit-pat talking...10+++++ My fav: In such cold deep dark nights Sleep comes easy to the eyes Hope tomorrow will be a bright sunny day And the birds will come out to play