Tuesday, May 10, 2016

Undefeated Comments

Rating: 4.3

To defeat me
An emotion you created.
I fought it.
Then, you declared
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Nosheen Irfan 19 June 2016

The emotional dilemma of a person is beautifully put into words. We have to keep a balance between emotions and reaction.

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Savita Tyagi 21 May 2016

Excellent. We are always taught to control our emotions but at the same time some body doesn't show any emotional reaction he or she is called cold hearted. A contrast expressed so well in this poem.

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Kishore Kumar Das 18 May 2016

A new concept.......defeating/winning emotions......silence can be one such emotions.....but one discovery from your poem...emotion has powerful energy and one needs the skill to control it.....superb poem by you....10 marks

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Bharati Nayak 17 May 2016

Lovely expressions, thanks for sharing.

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Emotional flow is overt, thanks

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Tough nut to crack, some times we need to hit hard, cute verse

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 May 2016

Hard hearted! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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