Caught in a bad dream I hit the wind
Arms readies for fighting with the unseen
Blank files is the life of the full time awake
Dark pages may fill the part time asleep
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A very beautiflu write. Pl. read my MY DARK NIGHTS. Same theme...your poem is succinct and very powerful.
there're many undead in us........the symptoms persist when someone taken for granted all his glory....without seeing his mortality is looming.fine touch allan.
Only he can understand his haunted tale Long for its end unknowing how it would be wonderful write by the imagery of life,10+, thanks for sharing
Aha! MY young friend! We nurture same emotions. This is really good poetry. If time permits please read my MY DARK NIGHTS. I'm sure u love it.....10