Friday, June 19, 2009

Unctuous Lil One…. Comments

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While caution and the wind blows,
through the earth its share flows.
From end to end the farmer ploughs.
Unctuous li’l one is caught in throes.
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Pandian Angelina 21 July 2009

So small the seeds of life And Fate the plough Help us to grow and Bear fruits with the help Of God the Farmer at the till! Deep thoughts plough Deep into our hearts! Angel

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Sonya Florentino 07 July 2009

hmm, intriging write Saadat... i don't know what the lil one is... but I suspect it has someting to do with fishing in the ocean and something that rhymes with squirm... and worm..?

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 02 July 2009

marvellous! ! ! ! ! kudos indeed!

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Rakesh Bedi 19 June 2009

A deeply profound composition!

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Ejaz Khan 19 June 2009

Birth throes are a natural process, for both humans and for nature, nicely penned!

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Catrina Heart 19 June 2009

profound thoughts......10+++

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Priyanka Bhowmick 19 June 2009

small yet powerful...

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