Saturday, March 1, 2014

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Slaves of fugacious muddles
Workings of the mind
Fixed as sandy puddles
Dyed-in-the-wool brutes of burden
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Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.
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Paul Martinez 10 December 2014

This is just about the best poetry of its kind in the world! You have a way with words like no other, every line has deep meaning and a message from beyond. Love to read and see what evils you stab at next. Smashing evil is on my list of GOT TO DO NOW! Thanks for your insightful, witty, bang-up style that gets me going like a rocket off the launch pad. Some of your phrases and words I just have to remember, so that I can astound my co-workers and church buddies. Paul

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Peter Laskin 12 March 2014

Tyrannical carnality & grisly deathliness indeed! People living in mortal sins & sadly think nothing of it! Yet, whoever dies in mortal sin & is unrepentant goes straight to Hell! Powerful, meaningful work, full of vivid warnings Dr. We love your earth shattering manner of writing. In fact, reading your poems makes one lose a lot of sleep! Kudos to you!

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