Monday, May 8, 2006

Uncover The Truth Comments

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Sometime I think life is over,
But when I look behind your eyes I can uncover the truth you hide,
The lies you told me,
The things I believed,
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Jennifer Cook
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Pranab K Chakraborty 13 November 2016

Uncovering truth is a fallacy of falling another lie behind. Any way, as a poem, well written. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Seamus O Brian 13 November 2016

The bitter truth. Loving and living both involve dying. Bravo, good poet.

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 November 2016

Hi Ms Jennifer, Yes, truth is bitter; the dearer the truth, the more bitter it is- Leaves you heart-broken! Lovely expressions. Exquisite poetry. Congrats on being selected as poet of the day. Keep it up!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2016

This is very interesting poem definitely. Love leads to think. Looking behind eyes and uncovering truth is really interesting...10..Congratulations! ..

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Clarence Prince 13 November 2016

It's very sad, but look up, there is hope!

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2016

Even a broken heart is worth to unhide the truth....10+++

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 13 November 2016

A sad but beautiful poem Jennifer.Congratulations for being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Indira Renganathan 13 November 2016

from the open page of your heart, all the deception is puked....an open letter to the deceiver- - good- - 10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 November 2016

Hearts do ache and bleed.... Congrats for being selected....

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 November 2016

To uncover the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Katherine Pinero 13 November 2016

I feel your pain.. And in the end I also get my heart broken as well as The trust.

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Kim Barney 13 November 2016

Congratulations for having it chosen as poem of the day! Well done

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