Tuesday, November 6, 2012

Uncontrollable Comments

Rating: 3.8

The room went dark as my mind bleed.
Spun out of control from these drugs but no turning back now.
Far gone and blue. black and grey is all I see. There is no futue and there is barely a present.
My body holds no breath as I gasp for air. No soul or a conscience, a foul mind and a no good heart.
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Jesse Tampa 01 March 2013

I really liked it, good imagery. Subject matter is dark. Composition, well.

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Lyn Paul 07 November 2012

Touching Kristina. Thank You

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Paddy Jansen 07 November 2012

u really left me speechless with this poem 10+

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