leaves when touched by autumn
fades to color grey
none can stop them falling
no prayer would make them stay
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We are little against Nature's rhythm. So much we can not change yet we may enjoy while it lasts. Lovely poem to enjoy. Also glad that you enjoyed one of my poem. Thank you so much.
A wonderful segue from nature's indomitable power to the human condition... well penned.
Rightly said......Kanav..........Uncontainable Nature beyond our comprehension....well crafted
A wonderful poem. Beautiful flow of words, with matching rhythm. Great message it carries, many things are beyond our control, in fact nothing is in our control. Loved it.
No words to say...it just touch my heart! 100 & 10 for it :)
We cannot reverse the natural rhythm of life! Though somethings are within man's control, many a happening lies outside his grasp and command! A philosophical write, Kanav! !
......we humans are so powerful, yet some things exist beyond our control, a beautifully crafted piece Kanav, helds such a great message in few lines! `