Tuesday, July 6, 2010

Unconditional Love Comments

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If I was to ever call
Without a doubt
He'd be there
Even if it was his last
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Diamond Williams
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Marieta Maglas 09 July 2010

A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully.

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Beautiful! What it is to have a relationship of true love. Walking in forgiveness is a key to unconditional love! Wonderful poem; D

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I haven't met another Who needs me so much That I never have to suffer I like the feeling Of knowing I complete him nice clear concise heartfelt lines :)

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