Unconditional Love Comments

A very good poem, Nimal, as we all know time waits for no one. However, as your poem states, we continually chase after it. Thanks for the invite. Lynn

that is a short poem, but it doesnt matter cuz it awesome you can explain time and life in not so much word and people can understand that that a verry verry good poem.....i gave it a 10 cuz u deserve it

life running after time...no wonder we get old and tired....if we stopped, will time come to us?

We can only live one day at a time. And make that day worth living. Touching reflections on the brevity of life as we know it. Blessings to you, Sandra