Unconditional Love Comments

this again is filled with emotions indeed.. and liked the fast paced style of yours good.. with love shan

its so wholly as sth created by God

Unconditional love embracing everyone, a great idea. The poehm as an interesting inner flow which creates unity of the 'opposite', like Unconditional Love. 'To be Content and Dear A Disciple and a Goal To be Single and the Whole ' A very fine write! 10

... unconditional love learned by mothers is perfectly nailed and the poem is flowing well penned - joyous and joyful / blessed and blissful - lovely play with words.

Very beautiful! I love the rhyme in it! Proud of you!

A very profound piece, I like the last line 'My heart beats unconditionally for others', simply lovely,10 Lynda xx

The line I liked the most: 'I have learnt those from mothers'. Thanks for the spirit of generosity in this poem.

I very much like these surprising metaphors, the Nightingale ...10... Tsira

let me be the umbrella... the rain... the mountain... the river... the sun... the home... the garden... in your dome

Another gem here, unconditional love what more can one give or want! *10*! ! A delightful poem! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

Beautifully expressed....Your creations bring light to so many my friend.. Hope you've got plenty of that golden ink you write with left best wishes Jon