Friday, May 18, 2012
Uncomplicated Time Comments
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My dreams now are tepid, composed as they are
Of slackened sinews and uncomplicated time,
New rift valleys to dam forgotten faults-
Or the insidious extension, of skeletal fingers.
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Johnathan Juarez
18 May 2012
nice. it has a strange pessimism that makes u wonder, is that what happened to me? (i wonder if i died awake asometimes, i hope not.) beautifully brutal in that sense. good addition
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8/23/2025 9:50:21 AM # 1.0.0
the last line is a real kicker... thought inspiring!