Uncle passed away in sleep
In the wee hours today in peace
The breeze held its sibilant breath
Leaves paused and listened in depth
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Beautiful presentation. Fantastic lines..... He was the best lesson they could have On graceful aging sans fear of grave Very true said in each lines. Uncle lived a beautiful life, though he was all alone. Though partial blind he was, really he made himself comfortable in whatever the aging had done to him. Simply Beautiful poem. Loved reading it. ++10
This poem is an epilogue of the buoyant life that your uncle lived sans his near and dear ones. The way you have summed up the poem is fantastic. Your uncle seems to have cheated death of its travails and tribulation. A wonderful write Sir.