Monday, August 13, 2012

Uncle Jim Comments

Rating: 5.0

A creaky screen door
On an Allegheny porch
Rolling rockers
On paint chipped planks
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C.R. Blazo
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Kemi Kemms 03 September 2012

I could totally imagined uncle Jim playing the guitar. I like the usage of metaphores. Well done!

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Kasia Fedyk 14 August 2012

beautiful, it put a smile on my face and I already like Uncle Jim and can hear the sound of him playing the guitar, I can see his heart and his soul whith every note

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C.R. Blazo

C.R. Blazo

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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